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Review of Starship Sentry  
Review by JudyB
Rated: E | (4.0)
It sure is a puzzle of sorts. *Smile*

I guess having grown up in the Starship Enterprise era on television, with Captain Kirk, etc., I was intrigued to read this story.

In some places, the words you used were perhaps a bit too big , ex. "assiduously" but all in all I was able to follow the story.

I was compelled to read it through to the end, and I must say, I couldn't help but smile at where you were going with this.

Nice work.
:) Judy
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Review of I Dance Alone  
Review by JudyB
Rated: E | (4.0)
This would certainly bring back similar memories to many adults who were less than accepted by their schoolmates.

It is sad but true that in every grade and every school there is always one or two children who are taunted, ignored and left out. I think teachers, who I realize are already overworked, should purposely plan to draw those children into the group, whether it be through a class pet they contribute, an important class project they are chosen (by the teacher, of course) to undertake. It is a sad scene to be sure.

My background is in social work and we all know how the pain of childhood isolation can adversely affect a child in his teen years and beyond.

Are you planning to try to get this published somewhere? I think you have chosen a good slant to tell the story and it read well.

:) Judy
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Review by JudyB
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very concise, to the point, helpful summary of how to be a good "reviewer".
What you have written, and more importantly, how you have laid it all out, teaches as well as encourages the reader to review in the best possible way.
The use of examples, ie. "color", "bold letters" etc. visually demonstrates how this can improve a written review and yet cautions us to not overuse them.
Thanks for taking the time to write it.
JudyB
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