This is a very well written piece. Your character and external setting description are great. And your dialogue is well written also, and serves to illustrated the father's dislike of unnecessary conversation. I would like to suggest that yopu add a little description of the inside of the house, though.
All in all, this was a very enjoyable read, though I wouldn't call it fantasy (your poll is what got me involved with the reading.) I would market it as mainstream fiction. Very well written fiction. Keep writing! I look forward to reading more of your work.
This is a very good story. It was an enjoyable read. It seems to me that if you fleshed it out a bit, you could build an entire world out of this story. But that's just my opinion! I'm a description junkie due to the fact that description is one of the failings I'm trying to overcome in my own writing.
Keep writing, I look forward to reading more of your work!
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