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Review of The Railroad  
Review by Lyricist_85
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
if your looking for a personal song, that was really good. brought tears to my eyes.wow, that had me crying. But on the commercial side, this wouldnt sell. it's way too long with way too verses in them. 6 max. Producers and managers dont want to waste time reading long ass lyrics. they want short and to the point.
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Review of The Last Rose  
Review by Lyricist_85
Rated: E | (3.5)
this seems more like a poem then a lyric to me. I feel you put some emotion into it but I feel you could've played around with your wording a bit more and came up with more catchy lines. I feel this was just a bit above average which is good but I feel you could've done more with it. keep writing and you'll keep improving my friend.
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Review of A New Form Of  
Review by Lyricist_85
Rated: E | (2.0)
this could be a great lyric if you put more content into it. I feel you left me hanging because you didn't tell much in this. Also, your chorus was way too short, once again, not enough content. I think you should go back and re-write this and put more thought into it.
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