Profound and emotional I can feel the anger at the beginning between the words. Then the pleas like a child not wanting to be left alone.Love this writing true art. Keeping writing thanks for sharing your work.
Wow, amazing writting had me at a grip through out the reading. The emotion the descriptions. The ability to transfer this to you reader through words is an amazing skill. Very well written. Thanks for sharing your work.
I absolutley love your writing. Its these beautiful memories like in your writing that you learn to appreciate the little things the beautiful memories that bring a smile to your face.Thanks for for sharing your work. Your writing brought a smile to my face. Keep writing.
Absolutely touching had me at a tight grip throughout the reading. I can feel love, soft whispers, grief, anger, so much anger and despair. Reading between the lines I was taken by all the emotions in your writing the ability to capture these emotions is incredible. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing work.
Absolutely well written; the flow of thoughts. The longing to go back to the days where everything was so new and being just happy. Mental illness is everywhere and finding the balance and right combination of medications as well as being adherent to them can be quite exhausting. But its possible the mind is an incredible organ. Love words you can make anything of them. I would double space to make it easier to read for others. However, your words kept my interest till the end. Definitely keep writing its an outlet. Nice work.
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