This was quite good. I love your descriptions, exspecially of the setting. It makes me fell as though i am there, and that your characters are right here with me. Your word choice was excellent!Also, i thought it was great how you made the charcters so realistic, there expressions are written as though i was watching a movie. You have a great use of deatil, and overall this was veyr good.
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