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Review by mego
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
You need more pages before this story can draw people in!
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Review by mego
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Very odd adventure. I won't fault people for liking it though.
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Review by mego
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Not my thing, but well written, I guess?
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Review by mego
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Not really my thing, but well written all the same.
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Review by mego
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very hot story. Would read again.
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Review by mego
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
An absolutely massive story. Wonderful effort.
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Review by mego
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Well written. Not my thing, but well written.
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Review by mego
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Not too bad. You need more chapters if you're going to draw interest though.

I liked the fact that you allowed for multiple different fetishes, but but since it's mostly all buildup and very little sexy stuff, I didn't feel very invested. Again, keep working at it.
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