The body has a funny way of saying it is over. Eyes are a definite source of information. They tell so much. I like the way the poem flowed. My favorite line "I care no more the dreams I give others" great write.
Great work once again. Sometimes life makes you feel ways that relate to at least one other person in the world. This was definitely meant for me to read today. My favorite line is "I care no more the dreams I give others". So truthful in my thinking at times.
Oh my goodness. Darkened ever so brilliantly. loved every line of this especially"Smell the sweet scent of decay". What a awesome yet disgusting feelings intertwined as I mentally put myself outside the door looking in.
A deep darkened truth that is truly in some of us. I also am a stained soul and seek refuge in shadows every once and a while. I will post a couple for you in the future if you care to r and r.
"Teasing me into consciousness" great verse here. i love the way it sounds when it is read. i really enjoyed the poem. orgasmic bliss is an out of this world experience. Everyone should have the chance to feel such a rush and explosion within. thanks for the poem.
that is the way to go. do not let a player hold the cards. that is their strength. a player feels that if they can make you feel like there are other options, then they can get you to do whatever they want because you feel you have to in order to keep them. this is just a little info to help you when you run up on a player. use your p**y to your advantage(sorry for the language). if you let a player know that he may not be the only one who could be tappin that when he start on that he will go elsewhere then this turns the situation in your favor. a player cannot let no one else get what he has. hey stay away from players.lol
i feel the hurt and the see the determination to never be used again. it takes alot for someone to not let the same thing happen over and over. i was used in a relationship in which i felt as though i was the man of the world, but actually i was the one laughed at as if i knew what a witch i really had. i learned to never be so gulable again. it turned me into a so called "player" and i just did not like that side of me so i decided to be me "a hopeless romantic". be strong and everything will come into play. thanks for the write. i enjoyed it.
This is a very nice piece of writing. Love will make you lay in awe of its presence and calm your spirit with everlasting warmth and confortness. thank you for sharing.
This is exactly what women and men need to learn. Things will happen that will hurt....only if the other finds out or is told. So dont ask dont tell is a nice way of saying keep things the way they are or we could just split up. great write.
I love poetry written with such passion and flavor. Awesome write. makes me wanna call up an old friend and unleash the powerful intoxicating lovemakin upon her. Thanks for sharing your words of passion.
this is a very emotional poem here. i feel the nevousness and the pain. The lonliness is gutrenching also. i am sorry you got caught up in such a moment. if I could i would take it from you. Sad and very well written. Thank you for sharing
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