I usually read things twice..no need for that here...i liked the writing style you have..also great descriptives and dialogue. I liked it very well. Will there be more?
It reads well enough. I struggle alot with decriptives and language ...but u dont.! Why no title..? Will it be a short story or beginnings of a novel. Give me a notice when u title it and decide where its going!
A very beautiful poem. Well written. Its amazing what our hearts can convey to our brains to write in words. This is truly just that, from your heart. Liked it a lot!
Good read..good writing. Ive only read 1 other "stempunk" story...so i may be favored because it was well written.great character buildups and descriptions...didnt quit catch the steampunkishness...i could read this wherever u take it. Maybe the steampunk part comes in later....good though. Keep on keepin on!
I like this because I wore chris's shoes growing up. A few trips to the er., several doctor visits for minor stitching. Ah the memories in this mind. Do you have other writings on WDC....A very busy site.
Very well written as far as i could tell. Just when i began thinking..if it cant br brought back up...you did clarify its never been used. Very good short story.
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