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Review of Popular Foods  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Maryann
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

My Thoughts:

I've been coming across some of you GoT-ers puzzles and word searches made during the competition, and have been enjoying them immensely.

Sometimes the brain needs a break from stories and poetry and needs to sink its teeth into some fun games. (Hmmm, does a brain have teeth? *Thought*) Oh, well, you get what I mean. Anyway, I did enjoy your puzzle.

Firstly:, it was about food. Some favorites in there. *Bigsmile* *ScallopBr*

Secondly: The puzzle was relaxing and did not make the player want to pull her hair out. *Butterfly2o**Butterfly2t**Butterfly2v*

Don't get me wrong, there are times when the mind needs some exercise and enjoys the challenge. However, when it's just for fun, and it relaxes a tired mind that has filled itself with a day's long collection of clutter, this was perfect!

I'm happy I found this little puzzle and decided to play. *Delight*

Great job!

Until next time--play on, write on, and ... enjoy life after GoT! *Scroll*

WebWitch *Witch*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello there ruwth
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

My Thoughts:

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review! I am so happy this story popped up. It's just the message I needed at the moment. It sent chills down my spine as I read on. *Phone*

Further Thoughts:

I loved reading this because I never thought of even attempting to call Jesus. You did, those many years ago and found a voice that brought you great peace and joy. Your call was answered, and I suppose it gave you hope. It may have turned your life around in way never thought possible.

Parting Thoughts:

This story has great impact. It's well written. I have nothing to suggest for improvement. Thus, I am returning the auto-GPs award.

Conclusion:

I think I need to make a phone call. *Pray*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch








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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, StephBee
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

Well, I'm back to play and review your Word Search.

First impression:

Party time for WDC's 22nd. There are so many things going on during party week and month, it's difficult to keep up with all the fun. Everyone is celebrating the festivities, contests and activities.

I didn't get to do many puzzles at the time, but now, I'm finding a new fondness of these Word Searches. *Magnify*

Further Thoughts:

I have done another one of your puzzles recently. I found it relaxing and a bit on the easier side with fewer words to solve. This one, I got to tell you kept me busier a bit longer. I like that I had to work harder to solve the puzzle. I did successfully complete it and felt exhausted..no I mean excited that I didn't walk away. I was a bit tired when I delved into it ... I know, excuses! *Laugh*

Parting Thoughts:

Something as easy as a party should have been completed in 7 minutes. I mean who doesn't love a party? Would you believe the last word I found was --party? *Rolling*

All kidding aside, it was a great puzzle, lots of fun and but for that last word, a good pace for a puzzle.

Conclusion:

Great job! *ConfettiB*

Until next time--write on, Puzzle on and party on! *Party*

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*




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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, StephBee
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I have been in a puzzle/word search kind of mood lately. Perhaps because so many of them passed before my eyes while crediting reviews in April. Got to thank GoT for that! *Laugh*

My Thoughts:

This was a fun puzzle. It was not a difficult level, thus giving someone who didn't want to burden her mind for a bit a little fun and games and just enough brain exercise. Thank you for that. *Delight*

Great word choices related to an Alpha Male. The words fit the type and I'm okay with that. *StarStruck* Several words were longer ones, thus were the ones I headed for right away. There's only so much space to share with longer words.

Parting Thoughts:

Nicely constructed puzzle. Interesting theme. *Puzzle2*

Conclusion:

Great job! *IceCreamB*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Review of HOTDOGS  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Lou-Here By His Grace
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read 7 Review. *Bigsmile*

First Thoughts:

Hotdogs ---summer, grilling, picnics, kids and fun. Those things are what I think of when buying hotdogs. It is thoughts of the past, growing up with family get togethers and all the cousins gathering around waiting for a hotdog off the grill.

Further Thoughts:

Thinking about the inner parts of a hotdog is never a pleasant thought. I think we've sort of moved on to gourmet hotdogs if such a thing is really sans critter parts. But then, who wants to think too hard on that. I do not. *Ha*

Oscar Meyer's always leaves a catchy song in my head. I may be older now, but memories do bring me back to those days.

Parting Thoughts:

Well done and quite descriptive poem where the word hotdog is not used. It appears to be a free verse that packs "eight to a plastic package," with ease.

Conclusion:

Thank you for the memories this poem brought of childhood fun and laughter and bellies full of an old favorite.

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*

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Review of Jerky Jaunts  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, iKïyå§ama
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest"  Thank you for entering April's flash fiction contest. *Bigsmile*

First Impression:

The title and brief description pretty much tell the reader this is going to be quite an adventure in survival. *Laugh*

Actually, you followed the prompt purrrrfectly! *Lion*


Further Thoughts:

Well how and why you ended up in a tree is answered. Unlucky for him he didn't have time to get dressed. Boxer shorts won't keep the tree bark from scratching, I think. *Ha*
Explained of course because the wild run to safety happened after taking a skinny dip in the lake. *Tempcold*

As per the prompt, the cellphone was on the ground where the lion sleeps, paces, awaits patiently. *Scared* Also within the prompt, a backpack is up the tree with the character to use anything thought to pack into it. *Cellphone*

How does he manage to get down from the tree without being clawed, chewed or otherwise mauled? The backpack contained Beef Jerky. Now, I ask ya, what feline would turn down that treat? Evidently the scent threw the lion off for awhile, allowing enough time for the daring escape down the other side of the tree. (Too close for comfort if you ask me. *Laugh*)

Parting Thoughts:

All's well that ends well. His friends were spotted hiding behind a cluster of rocks. They beckoned to him to join them and made their escape in the truck they came in, to celebrate the final days as seniors in high school. To think, it almost was their final days! *Rolling*

Conclusion/moral of the story:

Getting wasted while camping with friends could turn you into a mountain lion's squeeze toy. *Toy*


Well done! *TreeCypress*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Angel&Witch




Hello there, J.R. PETE
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest"  Thank you for entering our flash fiction contest in April. *Bigsmile*

Overall Thoughts:

You got the prompt rules down, Flash fiction less than 500 words. Stuck up a tree, mountain lion below, as well as cell phone. How did you get there and how did you get down?

Further Thoughts:

I like the blend of humor and wise thinking for this character. I also like the items he chose to place in his back pack. Items in the pack would be used to help the stranded guy out of the tree and away from the mountain lion still in one piece.

Observation:

"I[t] didn't explain where everyone went."

Parting Thoughts:

""Here's where I got the idea for fire. If I lit my spare boxers on fire, stuck them in the backpack and dropped it by the lion, the fire would scare him away..." *Rolling*

Brilliant plan to scare the lion away and get off that tree and into safety.

I really liked seeing that scenario in my mind!

Conclusion:

Just when you thought the day couldn't get any worse ...

"There was no way for me to know, Forest Ranger, ma'am, that dry fir needles were that combustible and would spread so quickly."

PRICELESS! *Laugh*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Joseph
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest"  Thank you for entering our April Flash Fiction contest. *Bigsmile*

Initial Thoughts:

Of course this was no ordinary flash fiction, No! This one has the character stuck up a tree in the morning with a Mountain lion right below. *Lion*

There are many ways on how to do it. However, the interesting part is how cleverly it can be done while entertaining the reader. *Ha*

Further Thoughts:

I wondered a couple things ... I know there was plenty of celebration going on with fireworks and partying. I guess that could explain not knowing how he got up the tree? Or, perhaps he climbed the tree for a better look at the fireworks. That seems to fit. Nevertheless, he was up a tree and a mountain lion below. I wonder why his friends never came back to help him? But then, --a lion! *Scared* The phone rang it may have been a wellness check by one of them! *Laugh*

Don't mind me. I sometimes let my imagination run wild. *Angelic*

I enjoyed the bit of a humor with the peculiarly dressed red-haired guy offering a trade of Moonshine in exchange for some smokes as a deal. (Do Leprechauns still hang around after March?) *Rolling* Why not!

Parting Thoughts:

Loved the way the character got the lion to back away and was able to make his escape.

*NoteR* I had to change the content rating because there was Moonshine/alcoholic beverage consumption, as well as smoking to 13+.


Conclusion:

Good job with the prompt. This was a fun read.

Well done! *Tree2*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Stuck  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Genipher
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest"  Thank you for entering our April Contest!

My Thoughts:

I loved the magic bag or tricks and what-have-yous. It certainly came in handy for this character up a tree with a mountain lion right below her.

Additional Thoughts:

Very creative solution to a tough problem. *Laugh*

I loved who the character was when the story unfolded.

Parting Thoughts:

You wrote a unique story based on the prompt. I found it quite to be a delightful way to give your character all the help she needs in her magic bag. I did however wonder how she got stuck in the tree in the first place. *Thought* I don't think it was made clear.Perhaps the strong beverage she had threw all caution to the wind. w*Laugh*

Conclusion:

Of course Mary Poppins inspires and perfects any situation *Umbrella*

Good job!

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Old T.V Shows  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch




Hello there, intuey
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am reviewing your quiz because you advertised it on the Newsfeed, and I decided to take the quiz. I love oldtime TV shows, when life was a little more innocent. Some of it actually a Pleasantville type of show where everything is in black and white. I remember those days ... with the help of my crystal ball. *Laugh*

Your Quiz was a fun trip down memory lane. I pictured those shows in my mind that I grew up with. *Delight*


Inspiring memories from the past, these TV shows were meant to last. Thank goodness we have ME TV, to replay many of them. *Ha*

I loved playing this quiz. Plus, it gave my busy brain a creative break with nostalgia woven in.

Thank you for that! *TV*

~WebWitch *Witch*
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Review of forgive me  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Rhyssa
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read& Review. *Smile*

First Impression:

Your title and brief description carry a profound message. I decided to look further into this message through the lines of your poem.

Further Thoughts:

You touch upon the way the tongue can bite right through another with its harsh words, those of condemnation and filled with anger. It causes grief, deep hurt and results in guilt. Yes, guilt. Because the one who does the hurting knows at the time that these words will cut deep. They are chosen through familiarity with that person or loved one. When you know another's weakness, you can make the most of setting up the hurt.

Guilt is realized and forgiveness is asked. I think we are all guilty of using those certain buttons that we can push to hurt another because our feelings are hurt, or perhaps we are in just a bad mood and want to lash out.

Parting Thoughts:

Your poem is well-written. It is smooth and flows effortlessly with fine rhythm. It has a potent lesson woven within.

Conclusion:

Great job! *Vine2*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Dog Breeds  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hi there, Maryann
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am so thrilled I caught this little quiz on the newsfeed. I wondered if I'd be able to guess which dog goes where, but decided to give it a try. I'm happy I did since I got all 10 answers correct.

Seriously, this quiz lets me know I can still take a pop quiz and pass! *Laugh*

There were many breeds of dogs chosen, and the questions were very clear. Based on them and perhaps a hint or two in the question itself, I was able to guess which breed. *Dog2*

I mean there are those with the fussy hair -- I was able to guess that one even before reading the list! *Laugh*

I just wanted you to know I enjoyed this quiz and it gave me a little break from other work needing to be done. Hey, anything that distracts me from working is a plus! *Rolling*

Thanks for the fun questionnaire. You did good! *Dog1*

Good luck in "Game of Thrones" 

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Averren
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review!

I came across this item somehow ... but just had to come read this! Why? You may ask. I have Greek relatives and really love Greek food. Therefore, when I saw Greek recipe for Tzaziki, I had to indulge myself to drool over it while wishing I had bought cucumbers last time I went to the market. *Sob*

Your recipe is well laid out. It gives precise measurements or at least a simple way to substitute an item or two. I would be using the Greek yogurt if I made it -- more authentic than sour cream substitute, but it's mentioned for those who prefer sour cream to yogurt. A matter of taste. *Bigsmile*

The recipe is a simple one but a delicious one for guests to enjoy with pita chips or other crackers.

I see you brought this recipe homw from Greece. That made it much more appealing to me. *Delight*

I have one observation. Usually lemon juice is added for many Greek recipes such as this one. Have you ever tried it with lemon juice? It might be another option to share with your readers.

However, recipes are quite personal and a matter of what works for a person's taste.

I see nothing to fix. It has all the ingredients, the measurements and the suggestions that make it a reader's choice when trying to make a batch for themselves and family.

Now, I must go buy some cucumbers! *Ha*

Thank you for sharing this wonderful recipe with us! *Delight*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Tim Chiu
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review click.

First Impression:

Your title and brief description offers the reader a glimpse into what to expect the poem to be about. It is the pursuit of dreams. *Hourglass*

Further Thoughts:

Your description also tells the reader that these dreams should be sought without over-analyzing them. That's good advice. We do tend to spend so much time wondering if we're choosing the right path to attain our goals that we often miss the huge turn in the middle of the road. *Web1*

Your poem was a delight to read. I loved the rhythmic flow and the natural rhyme pattern. It did not seem forced. It blended well with the original intent of the poem. It's true, there are expectations to be met, and required planning to fulfill them. But, if we are dedicated to attaining our dreams, we will be successful. Over-thinking as well as wishful thinking won't always meet those goals. *Thinker*

Parting Thoughts/Conclusion:

Well written and smooth, this poem explains a personal plan that works for this author.

Good job! *TeaV*

UNtil next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*








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Review of Damsel  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Purple Princess
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

No, I'm not stalking you during this super busy time you're "GOT-ing. *Rolling* This fabulous poem just happened to pop up on the Random Read & Review.

Initial Thoughts:

Oh, my, I felt my heart race reading this. I always catch the little nuances of WDC'c well known Romance and erotica writer.


Some of my FAVORITE lines:

Bolting like a Knight on a mighty steed, (How could one not awaken their senses with this vision in their mind's eye!)

Lightning flashed, the sound crackling in my ears (Beautiful sight and sound senses to picture the scene.)

cascading in black waves, blending
into the inkiness surrounding us. (Beautiful description! Love the cascading black waves referring to her hair. Follow that up with it blending into the inkiness of her surroundings.)

Amazing descriptive passages, line after line. The poem is cohesive, smooth, great rhythm throughout ... not to mention sensual! *InLove2*

Parting Thoughts/Conclusion:

Everything mentioned above and then some. This poem is Aces! *SuitHeart*

I'm so happy it popped-up on that random click. I enjoyed it thoroughly!

Until next time--write on!

And good luck with "Game of Thrones"  *Crown2*

WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Fyn!
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review. *Smile*

Initial Thoughts:

Loved the title. I was curious to see what those delights were. I was not disappointed. The moment you mentioned daffodils, you took me right back to those days before Florida snow-birding to New England as the daffodils poke their beautiful blossoms through the previously frozen earth following winter's departure. I miss seeing them. *Cry*

Further Thoughts:

Everything you mention brings joyful thoughts. Morning coffee brought by the one you love is a blessing of his love to you. *CoffeeT*

Making Angel Food cake as a return of one of those little things you share to show your thankfulness of him being the wonderful man he is.

Quick Observation:

"yet those sunny heads bud , and finally," [Extra space following the comma was placed by mistake after "bud."] It's so minor--I did not take away the well-deserved 5-star rating.

Conclusion:

Amazing poem that captured so many good things life has to offer if you are with the right person. *Fireworks6*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Corona  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello there, Anni Pon
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review! *Smile*

Oh, I so agree with what this poem states about what we've all been put through with that darn Corona virus pandemic.

Your poem describes handily how life was placed at a virtual stand still.People died alone in nursing homes --cruel and unforgiving hurt came from that. Virtual school, might as well be no school at all. Children missing socializing with friends -- depression simmering from the lack of human contact less than six feet apart. It was surreal and damaging to so many.

Yes, this poem is smoothly written and very telling about a time of grief, loneliness and panic.

Well done! *Vignette5*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, Kenzie
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Review! *Angelic*

I am reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review. *Smile*

My Impressions:

I love the positive attitude surrounding what is mostly viewed as a "stop light." Stop is such a command to cease what you're doing. But that's not always what it is interpreted as. Sure, you must stop your vehicle from moving until the light turns green, but that doesn't mean you can't occupy your mind in more positive activities.

What I loved:

I loved that you took the opportunity to make a stop light into a singing light for you and son to share that special moment. *CarBl*

Parting Thoughts:

Indeed taking away a stop light's negative and irritating affect and turning it into an opportunity that brings joy to you and your son is a beautiful way to share special moments that may have slipped by during the course of a day.

Conclusion:

Beautiful way to turn a negative into a positive and keep stress down at the same time. *Vine1*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*






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Rated: E | (5.0)
Angel&Witch



Hello there, Tim Chiu
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review!

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read & Review click. *Smile*

First Impression:

I know this will be a poem that is deeply religious and lets the reader know that faith is a strong step toward hope for humanity.

Further Thoughts:

Your poem is smoothly written and shows great respect for God's love and mercy, and His giving to us his only son Jesus Christ who died for our sins so that we may be saved. *Bird*


These lines state that well:

"On the Cross;
The revoking of our sins
Through Him is the context
Of our blissful salvation
From this smoke-filled, foolish pride
Of our doomed existence
With the Devil -"

Indeed, foolish pride is the fall of many until they let go of the sinful living and open our hearts so that the love and His grace may flow through us and those who are our brothers and sisters in Christ. *Cross1*

Parting Thoughts:

It's a beautiful poem of strength through faith and sharing of joy with humanity. *Peace*

Conclusion:

Lovely!

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of Form-al Failure  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello there, Writer_Mike
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Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the Random Read & Review click. *Bigsmile*

First Impression:

It seems so appropriate that this poem pops up just one day after tax filing day. I could feel the panic and it wasn't my forms stuck in the copier. Just the same, way to close to read after tax paying day to need a reminder of money sent. *Sob*

Further Thoughts:

The poem is light and lively and brings about vivid nightmares of missing the deadline. *Skull*

The prompt creator for this contest of course, chose this tortuous subject matter to write about. *Smirk2*

Parting Thoughts:

*Clip* Oh my what damage a little paper clip can do to turn one's peaceful feel of a job done to that of panic. Nobody wants to have to redo tax stuff over again. Once is absolutely painful enough!

Conclusion:

Humorous read for a subject matter that is far from a joking matter! *Scared*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello there, Joto-Kai
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the Random Read & Review click. *Bigsmile*

First Impression:

I was curious over the title and brief description. There was no clear giveaway as to what the poem will entail. I like stuff that makes me want to find out what I may be missing, so I didn't give this opportunity a pass.

Further Thoughts:

I actually read this poem a couple times to see if my interpretation would fit. It might have or perhaps I was totally off the mark.

Here's how I see it...
To me, I see a person who is a true working stiff with lots of responsibility and much on his mind. He needs to uncover the conflict he faces making decisions each day.

Now here's where I may have gneo off the rails! I interpret this as a person who has escaped death, had several near-misses and yet is spun back into his world with no relief in sight.

Parting Thoughts:

I may have gleaned things that were not meant to be part of what you expected this poem to portray, but I enjoyed it very much.

I think the lines were woven together smoothly, and it hooked the reader into a puzzle about life and struggle and escaping close calls. *Thought2*

Conclusion:

Well done! *Fireworks9*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of My weakness  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello there, Chaka-khan Wigfall
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random Read and Review selection.*Smile*

First Thoughts:

Interesting title and then the brief description further enlightens the reader that it is a poem about one's definition of love and re-examining it years later.

Further Thoughts:

The poem shows the depth of love felt through each of narrator's lines. Here, weakness is thought to be a strength for the devotion to the relationship. It may even be a way to cover for a lie or ignore that feeling to be happy in being in love even if denying a painful truth to enter the heart.

Observations:

A few little edits needed in these lines...

I adore my weakness,
our storms [storm's or storms'] dangerous weather.

Sweeter then [than]-
southern tea.

Whenever he witness [witnesses/witnessed] a frown upon
my face.

Parting Thoughts:

A true poetic attempt to describe the love the narrator feels for this person. The reader could feel the deep emotions felt.

Conclusion:

Good job! And welcome to WDC! *BookOpen*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello there, Jay O'Toole
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am reviewing your item because it popped up on the Random Read & Review. *Bigsmile*

First Impression:

Your title and brief description let the reader know that this is going to be a celebration of 30 years together as husband and wife. *Ring1*

Further Thoughts:

I think it's so beautiful to see what has transpired in those thirty-plus years. Role changes where the wife is now going out to work and the husband works from home and looks after their child. Wow, 17 years together before a child comes to the home ... that must have been quite a change over the normal day to day routine. Was the child born then or adopted? I think it's a wonderful thing being able to nurture a child and still keep the work and family life changes going strong and always through faith. *Home*

Parting Thoughts:

A line here and there had a small bump, but nothing very disturbing to the flow of the poem and mostly to the story of deep love and respect woven within. *RingsGold*

Conclusion:

A lovely read about a devoted couple who place their trust in God. *Vine1*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*






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Review of Green Goes Gross  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, Dan I Am
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest"  Thank you for entering our March Acrostic Poetry contest. *Shamrock*

First Impression:

Clean, crisp stand-out look at first glance. You followed the rules and highlighted the prompt clearly. *Gold*

Further Thoughts:

I love the humor and rhyme of your poem. It is a unique and clever way to use the prompt. It seems a creative cook has found out the hard way that shamrocks shouldn't be added to any dish being cooked. Okay, it's in celebration of St. Patrick's Day, but, no, no, no ...not a tasty addition! *Laugh*

Parting Thoughts:

I have nothing to add so far as edits needed. It is a fabulously smooth and humorous Acrostic Poem as is!

Conclusion:

Great job! *Shamrock*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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Review of St. Patrick's Day  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, JACE
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your entry as a judge at "The Bard's Hall Contest"  Thank you for entering our Acrostic Poetry contest in March. *Shamrock*

First Impression:

You definitely followed the rule to highlight the St. Patrick's Day prompt words. You used a large, bold font. *CheckG*

Further Thoughts:

Beautifully penned words bring imagery to the poem that takes the reader right to the celebration itself.

Loved These...

Ancient heroes, and kith and kin to dignify.
Traditions, tankard of ale, and tea beside the fire,
Clover and heather; the ghostly moor which day dispels.
Distilleries and dancing, from glen to city,

Going the extra mile!

' tis harps and butterflies bear missives of hope, despair.
Clever way to ad the apostrophe within the poem. It was not required, but not prohibited. *ThumbsUpGreen*

Parting Thoughts:

This is wonderfully written as is. I see no spot needing improvement.

Conclusion:

Good job! *Gold*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*


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