If you want an honest review as I, someone who knows absolutely nothing about you or your writing style or even what like for breakfast, can give, feel free to message me a link to anything you would like evaluated. If you want to be well read, you have to be able to grab and hold your audience until you are done speaking to them. You wrote those words: do you want them skipped over out of boredom? I will tell you my opinion. I will laugh when it's funny even if that wasn't the way you meant for it to be taken. My only desired outcome of an evaluation is to help you to see another perspective. Tell me your story.