Specific comments are shown in bold below. I've put additions inside () parentheses, I've used strike-through for deletions, and comments are in {} braces.
Disclaimer: These are opinions rather than corrections. Use them if they're helpful, and feel free to ignore them if they're not. It's your story, so your choices are ultimately correct.
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.18 seconds at 12:09pm on May 12, 2024 via server web1.