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Review of A Perfect Man  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (3.5)
oops! Sounds as if someone has had a bad expeience.
You delineated your thoughts and feelings very well!
Kinda of a tough situation and it seems the author is a bit beside herself.
Have no fear, time heals all wounds. Afterall, there's more than one fish in the ocean of good relationships.

You have a gift for creativity.
Develop it!!!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Matadora,
This was a good fantasy selection!*Smile*
You did an adequate with your character development, but go back in elaborate more.*Confused*

It was a good story throughout
Your description in the final paragraph was excellent.*Bigsmile*

Keep plgging away, you have very creative thoughts*Delight*

Respecfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of His Arrival  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great poem!*Bigsmile*
Great description to follow up on your title*Smile*

Obviously you were taken with this experience*Heart*
Hope you acquired a new friend!*Kiss*

This was a fun poem to read.

Keep up the good work!*Star*

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Julius vs. Nature  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
Julius,
This was a nice read!*Smile*
You obviously wrote from pesonal experience?*Bigsmile*
Having grown up in Kansas, "critters" are abundant and aren't particularlly fun to deal with!(misquitoes&chiggers)*Frown*

Your story is one which most everyone has had to deal with.

I really like your description of your weapon of choice*Laugh*
You actually had feelings for your actions*Heart*

Hope to see more of your work!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Great story!*Bigsmile*

You need to do a more thorough edit. I found a few puncuation oversights.*Frown*

The story was a good read.*Smile*
You appear to have thought it out before putting it to paper.*Rolleyes*

Work toward develping your characters a bit more.*Idea*
Use words that will make the reader evoke images as he/she reads this story.*Idea*

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Bringer of Death  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
You need to do a thorough edit of this piece. There are some usage and errors that you have overlooked!*Blush*

I liked your story overall.*Smile* It appears you like to write about tha Oriental Underworld.*Cool*

Don't be in a hurry to get your work out to the internet to be reviewed. I made that mistake, and as fate would have it a JERK cut it up and also critcized the work and then beliitled me for the moderate Gift Points(150) I had awarded for the review.

Such is life when you're trying to be creative.*Angry*

Keep writing, but don't get too far away from a spelling checker, a thesaurus, or a grammar check!*Bigsmile*

Keep working toward improving as you write, let your creative mind flow!!*Heart*

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Sisters  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good piece.
Expand your thoughts more.
Work on developing your poerty!

Respectfully,
Artems Quill
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Review of Annoying Brother  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
Roxyrox,
This was delightful and I enjoyed thoroughly!!
I'm a little brother, by five years. However, I had the good fortune to have a brother to this day never admit, to me, what a pain in the A** I was during ages 5-12!
You complete the poem, that was a good thing!
You said what you wanted to say.
While I read it I easily imagined that brother of yours, little "booger" that he may still be?

Stay with your writing, you have a gift! Develop it!!!

Wth a chuckle,
Artemis Quill
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Review of A Childs Prayer  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.5)
Excellent piece!!
You, obviously, had some experience with a sad situation involving a loved one?

You were dead on with this poem!

AQ
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Review of Moonville  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good piece for the contest.

AQ
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an oustanding guide. It really gives me a reference point when I take it upon myself to evaluate the works of others!!!

This is but one more resource available to those of us who are a part of Writing.Com.

Respectfully,

Artemis Quill
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Review of The Pocket  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice piece. A good read as it kept my attention throughout.

"Pox", the name was a sharp touch for your character.

A tender act for a person who apparently is destitute and without friends or support on a regular basis.

This piece made me stop and reflect on those who are less fortunate and who most avoid, like the "Pox"!!!
AQ
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Review of The Valley  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A very interesting plot. Your use of words was very free flowing and thought provoking.

My interest was held start to finish. The character development was super.

This story seemed to border on the surreal. It was almost dream-like as the plot unfolded.

Very mysterious ending. This was a good piece of writing.

I look forward to absorbing your other works!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill
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Review of Broken Heart  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good piece. You were very deliberate with the entire poem.

It held my attention throughout.

Your emotins were displayed openly.

It seems you were the one who was rejected and it hurt. You achieved your goal in this piece.

Keep writing, you have untaped talent.

Artemis Quill
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is great stuff for all us" newbies"!
We need all the help we can get from every source available.

It is quite comforting to know that there are so many excellent resources at our finger tips

The burdens and challenges of writing seem much less now!
What a fantastic place to spend time and interact with so many who love the written word.

Respectfully,

Artemis Quill
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Review of PLAYING DOCTOR  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! This was a hot memory for sure.
You did a very definitive piece on your recollection.

I have found, after attending several high school reunions, WE are all guilty of remembering different events in the past from a very different perspective.

Without a doubt, this memory had a very lasting impression on you.
Often an encounter such as this one has quite a different impression for both parites?

You did an outstanding job with this piece.
It was quite descritive and provacative!

Did the other person have the same perception?
What really took place?
Do both parties still remember the event?
What lasting impressions do they reacll now?

Very well written piece.
Keep up the good work!
AQ
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Review of THE SECRET PLACE  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.5)
Over all very good. Concise and yet good descriptions.
Reminds me of "The Secret Garden"

Good develpoment of theme from start to finish.
Gave time to stop and picture in my mind what was taking place!

Started and ended with same line a good idea.
What's next?
AQ
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Review of Ballade of Sorrow  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.5)
My over all impression of this piece was very favorable. It seems to tell the story of lovers deeply committed to each other, but a mistake changes their relationship. It seems to be open ended?

I especially liked yourremarks at the end* explaining rhyme and meter. Poets today seem not to take these items into account when they put their thoughs to paper. Your work was well designed and thorough!! Who, other than knowledgeable readers and poets rember "iambic pentameter"? I know their are various other styles, but have forgotten their design structure.

You seem to have a gift for this structured poetry.

Keep up the good work!

I look forward to more of your creative writing.
AQ
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great tool. However, I feel multiple choice questions might make quiz takers think a bit more about their answere.
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