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Review of How It Feels  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Noa,
I really enjoyed this piece start to finish!*Smile*
It sounds as tho you are a true friend?

People can be so cruel and unforgiving.
I particularly liked how you expressed your fellings*Heart*

This work should make others take stock of all situations as many times, things are not what they seem!*Confused*

Keep writing!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Great little poem*Smile*
You did a fine job with the words so the images are developed!
"Good" writing is like physical beauty, "It is in the eyes of the beholder", in this case in the mind of the reader*Bigsmile**Heart*

Keep up the good work and develp your skills. You have creative talent!!!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Uninvited Guests  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jaye,
Nice short story.*Smile* My mentor really knows how to write!
This was very creative and I'd like to know just what really happened to inspire the tale you wrote*Smile*
You did a great job with developing the plot.
I particularly enjoyed your ending to this piece!*Heart*

I look forward to spending more time enjoying your work*Bigsmile*

Respectfully,
AQ





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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Ben,
You really displayed your talent with these works!*Star*
Each of the entries was outstanding*Bigsmile*
I, for one appreciated the fact that you described each of your works for us literary "newbies"!!!*Heart*

I have reviewed some of your material recently and true to form you are developing a real talent.

Thanks for being part of Writing.Com.

With envy for your talent,
Artemis Quill*Wink**Smile*
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Review of Out of place  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (5.0)
Kim,
I thoroughly enjoyed this piec!*Bigsmile*
Tho short, you hit the mark with the images you created!*Star*

I look forward to more of your work!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Thoughts I  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
drunk,
I was quite taken with your writing!*Heart*
You opened your heart and that take lots of moxey!
I hope to see more of your work in the future!!!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Shame On You!  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
Sounds as if someone had a good relationship that eventually went sour*Cry*
You spent a great deal of your words on running down your once close friend*Confused*
Does this mean you still have feelings toward your former friend? Does it mean you detest this person's very soul?*Cry*

You have put a lot of feeling in this work!*Heart*
Try to show something positive that came about next time!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a very sensitive piece.*Worry*
It demonstrates to the reader feelings held deep inside*Confused*
It tells a very tragic tale, but ends with perhaps a promise in the future?

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Bri,
You were very brave to share this work!*Smile*

My overall impression is that you have experienced much, however, you have used the poem as an outlet!*Delight*

Use your writing skills to release your frustrations, it will be helpful in all moments of panic and stress!

Be yourself always, it is what makes us strong in the long haul of life!!!*Bigsmile*

I look forward to more of your work!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of try and try again  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
mookiepie,
Very emotional piece*Cry*

I enjoyed this as it touches of reality for all!*Frown*
Did you have a reason for not capitalizing "i"?

Keep up the good work!*Smile*

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this piece!{e:smile
Lots to think about with your thoughts put to paper!{e:delight}

You developed a mood of anticipation very well.*Heart*
Try to develop even more within this poem?

Hope to see more of your work!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill{e;wink}
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Review of Welcome  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
Clever theme and plot*Shock*
It reminds me of Dante's Inferno*Worry*

This piece has been cleverly developed!
Your talent for such work is very good!*Bigsmile*

I would like to see and review more oyur work!!!*Delight*

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Epitaph  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a very clever piece!{e;smile}
It was an enjoyable read start to finish.

Lots of profound statements within*Cool*

You have a bright talent!
Looking forward to more of your work*Bigsmile**Heart*

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill
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Review of SORRY  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
courtny,
Overall this was nice iece to read*Smile*
You obviously have strong feeling for the special person you described?*Heart*

You left no doubt as to what think!
What do you really want to ask this person?{e;rolleyes}

I enjoyed this very much and look forward to more of your talent on display*Bigsmile*

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Train Ride  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.0)
Randy,
So far so good. I hope you will enhance this a bit more?
It is the start of a good story.

You developed the characters up to a pont, but left us readers at the precipice.
Go back and enhance this and you will have a good story!

With respect,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Clouds  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.5)
Zach,
Your poem is very good!{e;bigsmile}

I love the way your words encourage the reader to develop their own imagery!*Delight*

You have a gift of letting your words flow and the rhyme and meter is well done!!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Is It...  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (3.5)
Ziggie,
Interesting piece!{e;rolleyes}
What is the definition of "detinue"?{e;confused}

I'm a bit confused as to he purpose of this poem?
Guess I need you to give me an indepth explanation as to what you were trying to get your readers to see, imagine, or perceive?

With respect,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Taking and Seeing  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
LaughingSmile,
Very nice piece!*Bigsmile*
You did a nice job of developing this work!*Smile*

Your thoughts are short and concise, I really like that!*Heart*
You left no question about how you really feel!*Heart*

Keep writing, I like your style!

Respecfully,
Artemis Quill{e;wink}
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Review of nothing  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (3.5)
Brady,
Take a look at the second stanza, "they hold their son" followed by "sleeping in her arms"?*Frown*
This poem creates a sullen atmosphere.*Cool*

Your use of lower case "i" seems OK.
You left off an apostrophe with "he s", was this intentional?

The ending depicts a very lonely person!*Star*
Interesting piece.
I look for to reading other works you have written!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of What Can Happen  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.5)
Zach,
What a wonderful poem!*Bigsmile*
This is a very inspirational piece.

You obviously gave it lots of thought.*Heart*
The imagery you created was very creative!*Smile*

Your style has much to offer your readers.*Delight*
I will make a concentrated effort to read more of your work.

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Life  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (3.5)
I enjoyed this fresh thought about "life"*Smile*
Time will educate you if you let it?*Confused*

Everything changes with time, including one's perspective on life.*Rolleyes*

You have good perspective now, will it change or not?*Bigsmile*

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (5.0)
She needs a little brother or sister?
This is a great journal!*Idea*

More fathers should have longer periods of time with total resposibility for child rearing*Bigsmile*
Give Mom a regular break!!!

No criticism here, keep up the good work!!!*Kiss*

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill{e;wink}
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great site, and I am very proud to have been selected to have my work highlighted this month. Nov.12th. is my birthday*Bigsmile*

I am so happy and proud to be a member of Wriring.Com*Heart*

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is reminiscent of "Foot Pprint", I have forgotten the author.
You hit it on the button when all is said and done, the measure of a man is not his shoes, but how he wears them and the tracks he leaves behind.

Very good and very enjoyable to read.
Left a good message for ALL!

Respectfully,
Artemis Quill*Wink*
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Review of Nightmare  
Review by Artemis Quill
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Excellent.
Very descriptive relative to the various feelings depicted here!

Can't imagine how one would cope with such a devestating event.

Well organized and portrayed in an appropriate manner and style.

Keep working, you have a gift for writing.

Respectfully, Artemis Quill*Wink*
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