Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do like looking back on memories and treasure the good ones. Easy to follow. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Lovely reflections. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I like the image included of the bridge and water. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
First Impression: I like bunnies and I wrote a poem for this prompt. I was anxious to read your take on this. After the last snow fell, a rainbow emerged. A cute way to start a poem. Mother nature had her sense of humor. Father nature didn't know what to think. So, I had to read more and I am here to give a review and my observations.
What needs your attention: The poor little bunny sliding on glass after slipping on a stone. Did he get hurt? I just wonder why there was a rainbow after the snow?
Part I liked best: A rainbow emerged. The bunny had floppy, striped ears. This is colorful and flowers bloomed. I like the different types used. This adds contrast.
Overall Impression: A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. The words blend well together. A good style with some action. This holds the reader's attention. Looks like you put some thought into this. A good presentation. I was hoping the bunny got a happy ending. This poem has nice descriptions of the weather. I enjoyed reading this.
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Nicely written details and seems like the person met an alien who hsd answers to his var problems. The person fell asleep and woke up to some solution in a container and thiscwas the answer to hos car problems and maybe the world. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Entertaining. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style and this holds the reader's interest. Lovely reflections. Stars fall from the sky. They return to grass and flowers and be cleansed with rain and waters. This holds the reader's interest. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I always felt sorry for the Princess having to sleep on all those mattresses. She felt the pea at least. A good retelling. A good style and creative. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Bequest. We plant a tree. The tree will outlive us. Good call. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I can't picture myself as Huckleberry Finn out fishing and living in that time. I had to smile. This was easy to follow and made me smile. Log cabins. A life of long ago. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. You seem happy. Creative and colorful. Entertaining. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Devotion to God is so important and we go through problems and sometimes forget he is there. A good reminder and easy to follow. This is uplifting and inspiring with words of wisdom. Food for thought. Beautifully stated. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I hate telemarketers and insurance salesmen. I always feel uncomfortable with salesmen. I get how this person feels. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Creative and been there like the character. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. This is like a person was consumed by a shadow that tried to suck the life out of him. This holds the reader's interest. A good style and looks like you spent time with this. Good descriptions and eerie as well as spooky. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Removing pins and needles . You dreamed of this. Dreams can be scary I was thinking of Princess and the Pea as I read this. Creative and colorful with good descriptions. I enjoyed the humor in this. A good style and good scenario with well chosen words Looks like this was fun to write. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sounds like the girl is a ghost and her picture hangs in the hall. Dancing at a ball. A good style and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. This holds the reader's interest. Good reflections. A neat rhyme pattern sums this up. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman running from someone following her who might kill her. You can feel the fear. Some good drama and suspense. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and the ending, the person behind her was running, too. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sounds like this is about physical scenery mountains as well as emotional mountains. Sounds like the scenery is nice and peaceful. A good style and easy to follow. You can make it. We have to believe that. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Welcome to Writing.Com Nicely written details and sad when you try to make friends and sometimes people aren't interested. Sounds like the rest of your life was good. A good style and easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Enjoy writing. Always: Megan
People tell us things and get us all misconstrued. I hate when things get weird. Nicely written details and this holds the reader's interest. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I appreciate the humor in this. We can never have too many pockets. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Martians wanting to upgrade us. That would be nice. Hopefully, it would be for the best. Easy to follow. This holds the reader's interest. Some food for thought. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good song lyrics. We do struggle in life. Love versus hate equals war. Life is a precious gift. Sometimes we do get fed up with things in life. A hint of a rhyme pattern. Creative and colorful with a good style and nice flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We live life one day at a time, one step at a time as we make plans in life . A good style and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Cherished moments ate nice to behold. The future is uncertain. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I hate when pets get old. Good descriptions and some sad reflections and happy memories. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and easy to follow. I wish our pets didn't have to get old. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I feel we shouldn't eat wild turkeys. They are to be admired. I hear they are tough. Domiscated turkeys are good for eating. Nicely written details and creative. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
A short passage but this tells about a romance and a good marriage. Sounds like the wife was feisty but it all worked out. Easy to follow and a good word flow. Nice style. Being in the navy. I didn't figure out what was removed but it all worked out. Thanks for sharing. Always; Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. You like writing about love with your special someone. Nice romantic sentiments and overtures. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. Some lovely reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and seeing a pretty white bird darting out of the bushes that looks like a silver arrow. Heat waves are bad. The bird talking cute. A dream. You need a bird bath. This is enlightening and entertaining. A good presentation and creative. I enjoyed reading this. Always; Megan
Nicely written details and love is hard at times. It is easier with the right person but life isn't perfect. Food for thought. Easy to follow and a good style. I was thinking this might be song lyrics . The rhyme pattern plays out well and this has a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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