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Rated: 18+ · Book · Women's · #562186
Each snowflake, like each human being is unique.
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#393849 added December 20, 2005 at 4:45pm
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Reviews I've received for The Snowflake Chronicles-cont.
Review:*Star**Star**Star**Star**Star*
Date:7-20-05

You have an interesting, diverse blog. I shall be visiting this again - keep on blogging!
Forever in Blue


Review:*Star**Star**Star**Star*
Date:01-04-04

A great start of a journal. I'm only sorry you haven't written more, as you get it off to such a great start but then have no entries since last march

Some suggestions:-

"And still remain a part of the whole snowfield." - it's considered bad grammar to start a sentence with And

"It is this snow blanket, protecting embryonic plants from the frigid winter that gives early spring its bright colors." - , after winter

"Prosperous Snowthe names my mind gives to my soul." - gap between Snow the
Andrea
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