First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Roddy stumbling out of the pub. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: In this phrase, verdant tales, did you mean tales or tails?
I like: My favorite part of the story was the climax. I like this part because it fitted the story.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.
First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the speaker, form, mood, plot, and location. The rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxed the plot of the poem.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the details the speaker mentions.
First Thoughts: This poem does a good job showing the duality of being human. The duality of having a soul and an ego that are in confrontation with each other. The narrative moves the poem's plot forward at a good pace, while expressing the emotions of fear and faith.
What I liked: This is my favorite line, Declares, “I am here.” I like this line because it climaxes the poem's plot with discovery.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem because of t he subject .
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the cab lurching to a halt. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The similes and metaphors used in this story are fresh and descriptive. I especially like this simile empty as a politician's promise.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the similes and metaphors, which added to the descriptions.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Karrena's question. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: Vancent's approach to getting the necessary information on Thantia was creative.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this exciting story because the action kept me focused on the movement of the plot.
First Impression: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. Each stanza gives important information about St. Patrick and St. Patrick's Day.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: My favorite part is about wearing green or you will get pinched. I like this part because it brought back memories of my childhood.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this St. Patrick's Day poem because of the information it contained.
First Thoughts: The poem follows the stated form and looks good on the page. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the questions give the reader something to think about.
What I liked: My favorite part of this poem is the questions. I like the questions because they require an answer from the reader.
Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought provoking poem a 5.0.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the questions. The conversation between the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The part about being allergic to green made me smile.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characers.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Jeremiah Grumpus finally going to Wal-mart. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
What I liked: My favorite part is the climax. It shows that when you address someone by their name you usually get a pleasant response.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Jeremiah.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the last sentence. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the laughter.
Suggestions: I found no technical problem.
I like: My favorite part of the story is the description of carving the pumice. I like this part because I learned something about pumice from it.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because it made me smile.
First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.
What I liked: My favorite phrase is Once a man. I like this phrase because it gives the poem unity.
Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it gives an overview of the life of Jesus Christ.
First Thoughts: The statement in the first paragraph hooked me. The conversation moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
What I liked: My favorite part is the climax. I like that part because it suggested what Paul would do.
Final Thoughts: The conversation between the characters kept me focused on the movement of the plot.
First Impression: The first line hooked me with aching joints. The rhythm of this free verse poem moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotions are sadness and loneliness.
Suggestions: I found no technical problem.
I like: My favorite parts of this poem were the questions. I like the questions because the gave me something to think about.
Final thoughts: This poem does a good job of expressing the emotion of loneliness.
First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the man having duck feet. The interaction and conversation moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building t he suspense and the laughter.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: My favorite part was the climax. I like that part because it was a happy ending.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it made me smile.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker wanting to get rid of his shoes. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: My favorite part of the story was what happened on the date. I like that part because it was a worst date description.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the main character and why he disliked his left shoe.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with old money marrying old money. Cal Cremora and C-mate move the plot forward at a good pace, while making the reader smile.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The silliness of this story because it made me smile.
Final thoughts: This is an amusing story because it reminded me of products I have used.
First Thoughts: The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense and causing the reader to smile.
What I liked: James because he is an intriguing and sympathetic protagonist.
Final Thoughts: This is a good character sketch because it gives enough information about James to make him appealing and get the reader's sympathy.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with the questions. The reasons for pain and suffering in the world is state logically and clearly. The question in the first paragraph are all answered in a way that the reader can understand.
What I liked: The third paragraph is my favorite. I like this paragraph because it explains precisely what free will is. I also like the note at the end which gives the Biblical translation the scripture verses are taken from.
Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0 because it helps the reader to understand why pain and suffering exist.
First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the reason the speaker was in a rush. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
What I liked: My favorite part of the story is the reason the mouse trap was in the coffee can. I like this part because it made me smile.
Final Thoughts: The first person point of view and voice was a good choice for this story.
First Impression: Tom-Tom's mother's statement hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation among the character's builds the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: My favorite part is Tom-Tom's interpretation of don't touch the food. I like that part because it reminded me of one of my brother's.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Tom-Tom.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Cabe's statement. The conversation and interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last paragraph is my favorite. I like this paragraph because it made me laugh.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it made me laugh.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, speaker, and mood of the poem. The rhythm is smooth and encourages the reader to read this poem aloud. The rhyming words are well chosen to emphasize the theme.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite line, That love is universal no matter who you be. I like this line because it states the lesson of the poem.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it gives the reader something to think about concerning love.
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