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Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/books/entry_id/492391-VENOMOUS-EYES
Rated: E · Book · Romance/Love · #959463
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#492391 added April 2, 2007 at 2:59am
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VENOMOUS EYES
VENOMOUS EYES



My heart was broken painfully,
It bled but now it’s healed.
As illusion dies, I see there
So much to be revealed.

The deep eyes that attracted me
Were deeper than I thought.
But their depth was full of venom
That havoc to me brought.

It was better that we parted.
Life together was hell.
I suffered silently because
There was no one to tell.

I am now free but in my dreams
Her shadows still haunt me.
I wish I had never met her.
A scourge for me was she.



• Written in abcb 8-6-8-6 format

• Written for "Like a Song" Poetry Contest, ""Like a Song" Poetry Contest

• Written around the prompt line: ‘As illusion dies I see there so much to be revealed’

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M C Gupta
4 March 2007

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