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by Toml42
Rated: 18+ · Book · Action/Adventure · #1210190
Death Blade, a dark tragedy of war and destiny set in the far flung future.
Death blade is my current project, it's pretty dark and grisly, so it's not for the faint hearted.

You have to pay attention, because the plot is pretty complicated and takes a while to unfold, and the whole thing is littered with subtext and allegories.

What i really want is detailed opinions of the story and characters, although any advice is very welcome. I need to know whether im being too cryptic - or if its too easy to see what's going on.

Thanks, Tom.
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