Nicely done. Eastern Montana has a BIG sky. I live in the west snuggled between mountains.
I loved the openness of Kansas... one reason why I'm going back to Isan in Thailand. "A little bit of who I am" resonates with wide open agricultural areas.
Big sky of Montana evokes
spiritual
inaugural
for many ordinary folks.
Much like a Holy telegram,
the vision stirs
and registers
a little bit of who I am.
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