Nicely done. Eastern Montana has a BIG sky. I live in the west snuggled between mountains.
I loved the openness of Kansas... one reason why I'm going back to Isan in Thailand. "A little bit of who I am" resonates with wide open agricultural areas.
City skyscrapers
obscure majestic sunrise
with all its glory,
and traffic shreds sanity.
I wish we could escape to
open spaces where
majestic mountain skyline
glorifies each day.
The Oriental Octet merges the five-line Tanka with the three line Haiku to make a single eight-line poem, as described and demonstrated in the following links:
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