Nicely done. Eastern Montana has a BIG sky. I live in the west snuggled between mountains.
I loved the openness of Kansas... one reason why I'm going back to Isan in Thailand. "A little bit of who I am" resonates with wide open agricultural areas.
Mondo poems are often very brief collaborative affairs that present a question and answer in the style of trying to glean meaning from nature. Mondos can be as short as a one-liner or as long as two 5-7-7 syllable stanzas (the first stanza presenting the question; the second the answer).
For this round, your poems need to follow the two stanza rule, please.
So, in summary,
2 stanzas
syllable counts for each stanza: 5-7-7
nature related
Example:
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by Robert Lee Brewer
why do winter stars
shine brighter than summer stars
and why do i notice them?
i can't hear them laugh,
but i remember the way
they once entered the darkness.
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