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Contest Entries: "The Contest Challenge"  Participant"I Write in 2018" Participant"I Write in 2019" Participant"I Write in 2020" Participant2021: Independent Writing 2122: "I Write: Enter the Second Decade" Participant2123: "Twenty-three in Eleven " ParticipantThis mixed collection contains fiction, non-fiction, prose, and poetry. Entries vary in length from very short to one that is over 3000 words. 53 entries written in 2018: ▼ 53 entries written in 2019: ▼ 43 entries written in 2020 ▼ 2 entries written in 2021 ▼ Entries written in 2022 ▼ NOTE: All Titles with ~ ~ are either non-fiction or based on a true story. |
I joined Writing.Com in January 2009. The first item I uploaded to my portfolio was "My Psalm" .I was delighted when I received this message:  The second item I uploaded to Writing.Com was:
I had originally written this essay for my college English Comp III class. My professor had given me either an A or an A+. So, what did the reviewers on Writing.Com think about "Make Your Dreams Come True" ?I was expecting accolades. I got 2.5 stars. Here is a link to one of those: Review of "Make Your Dreams Come True"  by Keni  .That was a rude awakening but I accepted the constructive criticism and began revising, revising, revising. You can see my original essay in a dropnote. The finished product (if indeed it is finished) is much more polished thanks to the feedback I got on here. Many of the reviews are linked in another dropnote. Here is a three star review with lots of feedback: Review of "Make Your Dreams Come True" by Sara♥Jean  My favorite line in the original essay was: "You hold the key (or keys) untried within your bosom." It did not stand up to the scrutiny of my fellow WdC members and was cut from the current version. What do I like best about "Make Your Dreams Come True" ?The steps: Step One: Envision Your Dreams Step Two: Internalize Your Vision Step Three: Take Daily Steps Step Four: Push Through Obstacles Step Five: Relish Your Victories Now Do It Again! Back to Step One Sadly, I have never made a dream come true. In spite of that, I believe in the power of these steps. Do you? Word Count: 240 Words. ~ ~ ~ JESUS is LORD! ~ ~ ~ |
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