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When I write.

by Xiea

Rated: E · Book · Other · #2235418

So when I write, I'll write.

For the rare times when I write.

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10 Most Recent Blog Comments:

deemac

Jan 21, 2021 at 7:06am
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Nice original little piece, kinda reflects the way I feel too.

Xiea

Jan 14, 2021 at 6:50pm
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Thank you Seabreeze

Xiea

Jan 13, 2021 at 5:57pm
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Thank you for stopping by! Glad you liked it 😊

StephBee - House Targaryen

Jan 6, 2021 at 12:15pm
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Thanks for your entry in the Bard's Hall Contest. Word Count was listed in accordance with the rules.

I thought the opening was engaging and the salutation addressed a reader. The letter takes a look at the author's life, where it was going and how it COVID had influenced change. The letters ends on an upbeat note.

Kåre Enga in Udon Thani

Dec 30, 2020 at 4:39pm
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I wonder whether you were thinking of Nashville.

Please edit if entering in a contest. There are a few typos that need to be fixed.

If you can get out tonight and the skies are clear look up.

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Kåre Enga in Udon Thani

Dec 30, 2020 at 4:34pm
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Reminds me of the "Dark Dreamscape" contest. It fits the prompt *wow*

I went to provide a link but saw that you've already entered it! I'm thrilled.

Seabreeze

Dec 9, 2020 at 7:18pm
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Wow. Cool story...hope you plan more. I normally don't go in for sci-fi, but this story is intreging..holding my attention. From your blog, I will be visiting your pages. Thanks, Seabreeze

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Madwriter

Dec 1, 2020 at 8:06pm
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I like the narrative your making here? I don't know if you did more with this or if this was just a one off but I love this so much. If you did do more with this please email me at this sight or send me a link? If not I would still like to know more about you writing style.

Madwriter

Dec 1, 2020 at 7:57pm
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This was vary fun short story, I had no idea what was going to happen next but I found it quite funny. I was a bit surprised at the end, but looking back I could see how all that would make sense.

Madwriter

Dec 1, 2020 at 7:50pm
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I love this, thank you so much for sharing.

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December 25, 2020 at 10:18am

#1000813

Mrs. Clause's curse

Did you hear about Mrs. Clause's curse?
Banished by her husband for she asked for too much,
She's was cursed to walk the earth forever and ever,
With no love, no care, just a few dim minions,
She's chose to pave a path of revenge to find what had been taken from her.

So she would watch every child,
All year long through her minions' eyes
For it was the children that stole her man's heart
With their twinkling eyes and bewitching smiles.

At the end of the year, during the Christmas cheers,
She'd send her minions to steal the gifts
Of the kids that had been naughty and mean,
And had disrespected their luxuries.

Every year, gifts would disappear,
Santa would wonder why the wear
In his flawless system of gifting his children
Until one day he caught a sneaky cursed minion.

The minion led Santa to his wife
And without any hesitation, she explained her device.
Santa, who was still in love, couldn't do much against her,
And didn't really consider the idea to vile.

Ever since then, the Mrs.Clause reunited,
With her husband, who had once, cursed and estranged her.
But underneath the mask of love, she held a crate of revenge,
To make him repay for the angony he'd put her through.

She took an oath to destroy Christmas forever,
With whatever means she deemed necessary.
And thus she made minion that,
All would see and flinch.
A cursed thing that dispised Christmas,
They say his name was Grinch.

LC:36

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