Seeking Sword Saint...

My story starts with the building of the tower of Babel.Main characters are (at this moment in time) Naphtali,her love interest whose name is Sword Saint and the Archangels Micheal and Gabriel. When the Tower of Babel is destroyed, Naphtali is somehow thrown through time to wake up disoriented within the Vampire haven known as Dead City. This story was originally written as a character bio for a text based online vampire game called Reign of Blood.Since I am no longer playing this game I have decided to post this story for everyone to read.I am thinking of taking the vampire aspect out of the story so I would appreciate any feedback.