darkening eclipse

the plot is that a young adult about 25 is a warrior that is top notch in his community and he faces many problems in order to become a king. he had a tough childhood his father was never around and that causes problems with his social life. the main characters are Dragoneye, Serpent tongue, and Sydor. i havent finished it yet so if u could give me some feedback as to how i should finish it. i would be honored.