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Apr 9, 2005 at 10:34am
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Would Love to get your Feedback on this Piece
by Twi
Hello again,

This was my first-ever attempt at a short story. I've since made some revisions and would love to get your feedback, when you can. Thank you!

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Would Love to get your Feedback on this Piece · 04-09-05 10:34am
by Twi
The Road Home: Reviewed!! · 04-09-05 10:40am
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