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Got sentence blues? Can't seem to make it fit? Help is on the way...
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Jun 13, 2005 at 3:27pm
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Re: Example of a sentence needing more punch
This is an example of a more discriptive sentence.

"It was the kind of cold that swirls around your face and makes you shrug your coat tighter against your skin."


Now you give it a try!*Smile*
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Example of a sentence needing more punch · 06-13-05 3:23pm
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*Star* Re: Example of a sentence needing more punch · 06-13-05 3:27pm
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