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Jun 25, 2006 at 9:11pm
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Re: Re: Re: ... the judging
OMG!! Sophy's high!! Anyone want to share my tenterhook???

On another note I wanted to share a little piece of doggerel I wrote for the seduction prompt, it didn't make the cut Lord knows why, it has to be as good as anything else I wrote for the prompt, lol...

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In a sea of bodies my eye is caught,
ancient as a tail flicking in the forest,
my blood goes up
and down with every graceful
skirt-clinging step, every ball-bearing bounce.
Every other thought flicked right out my head

Life is full of curiosities.
We’ll spend hours mulling them,
chewing up statistics on the porch,
debating all sorts of inanities at the bar,
like deductive reasoning, religio-politics, the advantages of higher education.
As if any of it added up to a hill of beans.

When all it really takes is just one tail twitching
and we’ll hop down from our intellectual trees immediately
to scent-mark some fireplugs.


Dale Arthur

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... the judging · 06-25-06 7:01pm
by Zoo - Salted and Roasted
Re: ... the judging · 06-25-06 8:14pm
by Diane
Re: Re: ... the judging · 06-25-06 9:01pm
by Joy
*Star* Re: Re: Re: ... the judging · 06-25-06 9:11pm
by Dale Arthur
Re: Re: Re: Re: ... the judging · 06-25-06 9:46pm
by Zoo - Salted and Roasted
Re: Re: Re: ... the judging · 06-25-06 9:58pm
by Texas Belle
Re: Re: Re: Re: ... the judging · 06-25-06 11:52pm
by Sophy

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