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Dec 13, 2006 at 7:22am
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Re: Please review
Striking and well crafted with a good backstory, easily engaged with by the reader. I particularly enjoyed the contrasts..

It scanned well on the page, as well as working when read aloud. I really enjoyed it, and the neat simple conclusion was easily identifiable and feelings mutually shared by any mother.

Well done and thank you for sharing.


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Please review · 11-05-06 4:03pm
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*Star* Re: Please review · 12-13-06 7:22am
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