Hideous Reviews I Never Gave

I read this and thought, "This should be good." And it was. (By the way, I'm really nervous writing this post.) I have found that in fact it was a really good forum and I'm likely one of the people that these would be targeting. I have a tough time with tense and I'm hoping that the fact that it is a rough draft will make things... a little smoother and hopefully you'll understand. I've always been one to just write and not look back until I can look back. Even now as I'm editing I find myself looking forward to part three, a war between four countries. I've got all worked out in my head and can't wait to write it but first I want to edit the first part. (I'm really slow with it).

To my point then, do you guys have any advice on how to edit your own work better and faster? Can the two actually walk hand in hand?

Now I'm going to reread what I just wrote and try to catch any grammer and what not problems. (Watch that sentence get ripped apart.)

** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **