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Aug 5, 2007 at 1:10am
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Review Request
Hello Sadie,

I am requesting a review of chapter one of my work in progress novel, Broken Silence.
 Broken Silence  (13+)
When Ricky's father is killed, it turns out to be more than an accident.
#1300040 by JustinMiller87


It is a military-centered thriller set in the 1960s in the dawn of the space race. In the document I have a completed prologue, chapter one, and epilogue. I also have the beginnings of the second chapter, and the outline for the rest of the novel so you will have an idea of where the story will be going as I work on it.

Thanks in advance for your review. I really appreciate it.


Justin Miller
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Review Request · 08-05-07 1:10am
by JustinMiller87

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