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Aug 6, 2007 at 10:58pm
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Please Review
Hi,

I would love a review of two chapters.

Much appreciated.

 Sometimes Feathers  (E)
Not certain about genre. Not really a children's story, not quite fantasy.
#1299867 by Silentmiller


 Sometimes Feathers, chapter 2  (E)
continuation of chapter 1
#1300281 by Silentmiller
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Please Review · 08-06-07 10:58pm
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