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Rated: 13+ · Message Forum · Entertainment · #213819
I've got the words, if you've got the time. Gimme your best Para/Poem.
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Mar 7, 2008 at 3:24am
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Re: Friday Four
Boy! Do I love that first line. Over all I like the whole thing, but it feels like a verse rather than a complete poem. I want to know more about him, perhaps why he's like this and definitely what happened. With some intro verses and more to follow, this could be a great story poem. (Kinda like Casey at Bat, but heavier, more grim, though not necessarily.)



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Everything hangs on words, including ourselves. Often we only learn what we think -- and who we are -- when we write. -- Roger Rosenblatt, Family University Professor in Writing
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Friday Four · 03-01-08 1:58am
by A Non-Existent User
Re: Friday Four · 03-01-08 5:47am
by wordsy
*Star* Re: Friday Four · 03-07-08 3:24am
by Airycat =^..^=

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