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Apr 13, 2008 at 11:35am
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Re: Was It Nothing?


I have been adopted by a mentor in The Angel Army
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Hi - My name is Judy, and I am guest reviewing for Nancy's Poetry Forum. This poem was nice. It evoked a lot of emotion and you could identify with it. I would suggest though that you separate your thoughts into paragraphs so that it is easier to follow. The other comment that I have, and I am a little confused about that, so correct me if I am wrong, is it not lying next to you. - but maybe I am wrong.
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Was It Nothing? · 04-12-08 10:49am
by Dani
*Star* Re: Was It Nothing? · 04-13-08 11:35am
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