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Apr 28, 2010 at 12:38pm
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My revised prologue
In the next few weeks, I'll be editing my two mythological novellas posted on WDC. After that, I'm combining them into one long novel containing 106 chapters. I'm starting with the following:

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Any construction comments or suggestion to improve them will be rewarded with gift points. Just don't change my style by radically rewriting my sentences. I really, REALLY dislike when reviewers do that!
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My revised prologue · 04-28-10 12:38pm
by J. A. Buxton

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