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I will review any short story or novel. No deed to pay although I accept donations.
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Jun 10, 2010 at 11:45pm
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by A Non-Existent User
This is the third chapter of my novel. It's the very first draft, no revision done. Genre is: fantasy, action/adventure, young adult
Would really appreciate any feedback you can offer. Please and thanks in advance.

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Please Review · 06-10-10 11:45pm
by A Non-Existent User

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