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I will review any short story or novel. No deed to pay although I accept donations.
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Aug 15, 2010 at 2:35am
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Please review: Brittle Bonds (short story)
I'd really appreciate your critique of this piece:

 Takes Three To Tango  (18+)
Something's got to give before the dancing ends
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Please review: Brittle Bonds (short story) · 08-15-10 2:35am
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