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Jan 3, 2011 at 8:00pm
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Just thought id see if this would sink you in....
         I think I have decided on the way I want to start my book, but I really would like some opinions to see if this first bit would pull the reader in and want to read more..any and all reviews and feedback is much appreciated
Thank you
         -Dani

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Just thought id see if this would sink you in.... · 01-03-11 8:00pm
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