Story Cafe

Hey, um I'm like brand new here and I don't know what people feel about fanfiction's here; but could someone/would someone like to read my Outsiders fanfiction and give me tips/feedback/critique? It would help if you have read The Outsiders, haha.

If you read it and find it interesting or would like to help me with it (I have two betas but the one is only there because I borrowed some of her story/ one of her characters, and the other just does straight up grammar stuff so I could always use more help) please e-mail me because I have some floating chapters and bits from the storyline I would REALLY like help with and opinions on; including a rape plot. (yes I know its a serious topic, but it HAS to be in there and I just want some help with it is all)

So, I'm going to quit blabbing on now and if you have the time or patience to read my story here is the link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5363488/1/Keep_No_Secrets

I have 15 (soon to be 16) chapters up and they are averaged at about 14.5 pages in word. I have had a few longer than 20 pages so I apologize for the length.