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Rated: E · Message Forum · Contest · #1471096
A monthly contest to reward the best poem out of 5-star poems.
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Jan 29, 2011 at 4:20pm
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I did a review of one of your poems and it was so sad. Review of "MOMENTS I COULDN’T SAVE" yields: Review of "MOMENTS I COULDN’T SAVE"
My poem is also sad, but it is fiction and free verse, which is my favorite. it other words, it is mostly half rhyme, and although I tried to corral it into some kind of form, it took on a life of its own, and kept writing itself. It is a story of a lonely young girl and her imaginary friend. Even after 76 reviews, it still has a rating average of 4.5 stars. I think it would have recieved more fives but it is rather long. In my defense, however, I couldn't stop until the story ended. If you are patient, you will see how it all turns out. Thanks for your consideration. My poem is entitled
Dream Spinner  (13+)
A poem about being Lonely.
#1092275 by chickpea a.k.a. Patricia Syner
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My Entry · 01-29-11 4:20pm
by chickpea a.k.a. Patricia Syner

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