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Feb 13, 2011 at 7:20pm
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Edited: February 13, 2011 at 7:49pm
Newbie here needs YOUR opinion
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Lyrics to a song I wrote about a deteriorating relationship.
#1751022 by HeadofWRY
These are actually gonna be set to song. I need opinion so I can get more polish out of this baby.
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Newbie here needs YOUR opinion · 02-13-11 7:20pm
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