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Feb 28, 2011 at 4:18am
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Anyone like to read & give advice on my first chapter?
by A Non-Existent User
Hi all, I'm quite new to the forums bu felt it was a good way to introduce myself and get more people viewing my stories. The short first Chapter of my new story can be found here:

http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1755306-Kidnapped-Boyfriend

Any comments, hlp, advice, feedback etc is greatly appreciated.

Thanks,
John
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Anyone like to read & give advice on my first chapter? · 02-28-11 4:18am
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