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by Ledan
Rated: E · Message Forum · Reviewing · #1600472
I will review any short story or novel. No deed to pay although I accept donations.
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Apr 30, 2012 at 2:24pm
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Kindly review 'Desert Thorn,Desert Rose'
by Farooq
*Dollar* 500 GPs were sent to Ledan with this post.
http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1851001-Desert-Thorn-Desert-Rose

I would be glad if you tell me whether the story made for interesting reading. Also what improvements need to be done.Thanks a lot!
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Kindly review 'Desert Thorn,Desert Rose' · 04-30-12 2:24pm
by Farooq

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