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Dec 2, 2012 at 9:25am
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Rip this chapter apart, please. ^_^
Hello there.

I would love a review on the first chapter of my teen fiction novel The Mercenaries. Any criticism will be taken as good criticism. :)

 The Mercenaries - Chapter 1  (E)
Being a spy isn't all that it's made out to be.
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Thank you!

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Rip this chapter apart, please. ^_^ · 12-02-12 9:25am
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