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I am so encouraged by reading all the communication going on in here! Just snooping with the forum conversings has been a huge help to me! My name is Jacque and I have the first 5 chapters of my book posted, but am having trouble getting anyone to read and review... if some one is free, has time on their hands and wants to help a fellow aspiring writer get off the ground and running... I would appreciate your honest critiques... And I will return the favor and review your own material, I promise!

Here is the first chapter link, the other chapters are listed on my portfolio. (Thank you for at least reading this far! )

Upside Down

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Upside Down Chapter One
Diane and her 10-year-0ld daughter flee an unknown enemy.The body count rises as they run.
by Jacque (1)

Chapter One