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Nov 14, 2015 at 11:03am
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Review request: Poem
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I have been working on writing poetry that is less abstract than previously. It's been difficult; I tend to lapse into prose, or just get stuck. But it is getting better and any insight or comments you may have about this particular effort would be appreciated.

FYI: This was written for Stormy's poetry newsletter contest. The eight words to use were: dust, tinsel, boxes, ribbon, lights, bells, flakes and keepsake.

Thank you!
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Review request: Poem · 11-14-15 11:03am
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Re: Review request: Poem · 11-25-15 3:54pm
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