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Dec 8, 2015 at 1:28pm
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Review request: Poem
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This poem try's to apply suggestions you made for Doe, A Deer. Most observable: I refrain from "suddenly". I also tried to focus on line breaks and layered content. Thank you.
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Review request: Poem · 12-08-15 1:28pm
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