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Apr 20, 2016 at 1:01am
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Hi, Edgework.

This won't take you long. A poem I'm thinking of submitting for a competition whose deadline is next month. Not much rhyme or meter; it's more about substance. Please indulge me with a review on cohesiveness and clarity. It's about the extrajudicial killing of a lion in a corrupt society.

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Put it before them briefly so they will read it, clearly so they will appreciate it, picturesquely so they will remember it and, above all, accurately so they will be guided by its light.

Joseph Pulitzer
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