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Aug 12, 2017 at 3:11pm
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Please review my first chapter.
by Denine
Hello. I know you're probably really busy, but I was wondering you would could possibly help me and review my first chapter of my novel? I would really really appreciate it.
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Please review my first chapter. · 08-12-17 3:11pm
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