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Hi Paula, I'm not Alex but I think I could help.
         And here's what I got:
         1. I think internal dialogue would be a great idea because it seem most like actual thinking and is very unique!
         2. I typically use past-tense but I would recommend you use whatever seems most comfortable.
         3. try using your antagonist (social anxiety?) to help create your plot and perhaps some obstacles to lead to a final climax.
best of luck to you.